I Want To Be

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by CrazedMidget (Sweet fantacy's really do come in small packages!) on Friday, 20-Nov-2009 20:19:27

Just a song I wrote a while back that I don't think I put on the zone.. enjoy

No one knows what it’s like,
No one understands.
No one knows what to say,
And that’s why I never get the chance.
No one knows how I feel,
And that’s why I can’t be healed.

Chorus:

I want to be quik,
I want to be free.
I want to be heard,
So people can see.
I want to be noticed,
So people can believe,
That there is more than what you see.

No one knows what it’s like,
No one understands.
I know I can take on the fight,
Just give me a chance.
No one can even see,
Who I can truly be.

Chorus:
I want to be fast,
I want to be fearless.
I want to shine,
And blow you away.
I want to be noticed,
So people can believe,
That there’s more than what you see.

Bridge:

No one knows what it’s like,
No one can understand.
No one knows how it feels,
And that’s why I never get the chance.

Chorus:

I want to be quik,
I want to be free.
I want to be heard,
So people can see.
I want to be noticed,
So people can believe,
That there is more than what you see.
I want to be fast,
I want to be fearless.
I want to shine,
And blow you away.
I want to be noticed,
So people can believe,
That there’s more than what you see.

Post 2 by Sword of Sapphire (Whether you agree with my opinion or not, you're still gonna read it!) on Saturday, 21-Nov-2009 0:23:55

I like this. I especially like the use of one sense to help support another. Very nice.

Post 3 by Elenhiia (Feather'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr'rr for president!) on Saturday, 21-Nov-2009 14:56:14

Agreed. Though it's not a faceted work of the highest brilliance in writing, it doesn't have to be--if it were, it wouldn't be what it is, and it wouldn't be as pretty and heartfelt as it is--it wouldn't be able to express so simply what it does now.

Post 4 by CrazedMidget (Sweet fantacy's really do come in small packages!) on Saturday, 21-Nov-2009 14:59:07

thanks guys, i forgot i wrote it, and i was just looking through my stuff the other day and i realized i haven't posted a song up in a while